I don't think revising is much fun, I think is a boring part of writing. For me revising doesn't allow me to give much input to my own work, or at least i didn't think it did. And now I know I can i always add new ideas, but seeing as we did this a couple of weeks ago, it's a little hard to bring up new ideas that correlate with what I am trying to say. The feedback that I received was extremely helpful, but it's sometimes overwhelming because there are ideas from the question that were given to me in feedback but don't know how exactly to build it in with my previous writing. I almost feel like I want to start all over, and that's what i don't like about revising. I almost feel as though i should start over, building upon my work is hard for me. This picture shows how i feel because I feel overwhelmed and to a point bored of revising although i know it can only improve from what i have. I really do appreciate all the feedback which was given to me, and it is extremely beneficial to improve on my writing. But like i sais, it is overwhelming to take on so many questions and build upon my writing while incorporating new ideas and making them easily flow.