Monday, April 4, 2011
Proposal Project 3
My message is to help new athletics that want to be successful. My audience would be athletics that want to inprube their abilities be learning some new strategies. My public document could be offering camps where couches can teach athletics. I will poust some directions where athletics can go.
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I like that you've narrowed in on your audeince but your message still confuses me a little. I'm not sure what stratgies our found in your research and i'm not sure what strategies your are aparte of your message. You may need to revisit your research in P2 and figure out not only what exactly it was that you were looking for but what you found out in the end.
ReplyDeleteYou research was investigating learning strategies but I don't recall seeing any thing abotu what kinds of strategies would work or how they worked or why they even worked. The bulk of your lit review focused on reading strategies, do atheletes need to utilize reading strategies? I suspect they do! How? What kinds? Do they have to make the kinds of connections H&F talk about?
You want to set p a training camp, and this sounds cool, but you have to convince me this will work as a public document? What will create? The schematic for the camp? how will that show/teach atheletes about the kinds of rhetorical reading they do? Will you create the lesson plans that coaches will use to teach their players about reading? how will that look?