At first I never understood what everything was like and still confused that I needed to redo what I seen, even though I passed it. Giving that the whole situation was hard on me, as of silent and unable to give out oppinions or ideas. Though I learned lots of things as I gone through this class. Given the things from this place I am able to write as I would, if it wasn't like a non-school related writings that I do.
On on how the writing and reading was in school, yet could not envoke them right. As I had negative and non-helpful feedback on the work I had trouble with it. My work was that everything was mainly just structure and grammar, with the idea of putting parts of thoughts into the work. As for reading, I had no idea to actually find the main points into the readings easily, as I seen others find it so easily.
On my round through the subjects I had some well thought outs on the work. The SQR were a heavy problem on my account of work. I really had hard time with them, I never can make questions to answer well enough. Though later on I could handle them easily enough through some guidance from the teacher and fellow classmates. The Readings were also tougher then I had once expected. The items were shaggy and were overly hard to create, not many of them could do a thing like that. Also finding Articles through those sea of pages for Project two was difficult to say the least. Their were things that fitted in the work while their were others that seemed to have a non-holding and un-trustworthy source. Though with them, I was able to open my thoughts on what was good and how each thing effected a person.
Discussions in class were very helpful as we got through them. It helped understand what others see about the work. Example is that of the Revise and Rewrite from the works of Sommers, on how people believed that revised mean to make anew while Rewrite was to just change a few parts while others thought of it the other way around. Also it brought out feedback that helped people out with things they couldn't complete or have missed. Though I had trouble with blogger a bit. I have great typing skills where I can type fast, and with blogger you can always add or change work, but using the blogger had difficulties like power-outs, connection losses, and other things.
From all the items I have done the projects were possibly the best I done in the years of school. I had major advances in work style, in fact the work I done was more then that of 5th to 12th grade combined, making me wonder how I even passed those classes. Though the work was well from the stand point of it all. Like of project 2, it had lots of hardening things and crushing feels as I post it out. Long lost but it was great feel to it, and a fun time doing it. The other item was that it had no difficults in them either.
Though I did feel good about them I didn't as much as I started revising them. The work was slightly killer. For instance trying to re-structure paragraphs in the projects to make them more clear and consistent to the work. I had nothing but trouble doing that. Though giving it that, I had better thoughts on how to redo things, like my project 1 item that was never completed. It gave me time to do things that I knew wasn't fully in their peak.
With everything, I learned a lot this semester, like I said before, from all my years of school combined. I learned how to be a rhetorical reader, finding the little things and exploding them into items, and I learned about Funds of Knowledge, the intelligence given from family and the community you are in. Things that was given to me, that strengthens me, like classmates and the readings, it has a heavier thing then what I could have done before. This, is where I say thanks to the class and thanks to the teacher for the work and the things that were given to me, to actually change from a person who thought things were of precision to that of understanding.
I think this is a very good work with a very clear writing and with very good ideas, but what I think that something that are missing, are the explanations of your project, for example the surveis and what was your thinkig based on those who answered your surveys, also something that you were missing were your question that you had at the beginnig of the semester, so somethig that you need to do is to explaing a little bit more your work.
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